Hey bloggers.
How are you?
I am doing the spring learning journey. it is where you do blogging over the holidays and commenting on people's blogs. If you blog you get 1 point and if you comment you get 2 points.
So Task one is: Name 10 different healthy foods that you have not tried, see if you can make them start with different letters.
Here is my answers.
What are some healthy foods you have not tried.
The food on the poster is okay but in future I don't want to ear mushroom or legumes.
I might try Grapefruit because my mum said I is good for me.
Anyway did you like my first spring learning journey.
Our teacher Miss Spragg said we can do 3 each week over these holidays.
But I am Going to do all twenty.
Did you like my blog post because I did.
Bye.
hi renae it xalia here from gms i will post school work but i will do mabye billie eillish camila cabello and katy perry sorry and maby miley cyrus sorry
ReplyDeleteHey Renae, its me Parwin. I see you are doing the Spring Learning Journey like me, the challenge is on!
ReplyDeleteI really liked the list of healthy foods that you haven't tried because you have added lots of colour and most of them sort of shocked me because I always eat tomatoes, capsicums, eggplant and cucumber! Cucumber is like the best thing ever and you haven't tried it! Just kidding but it is really nice and I recommend you try it. Trust me, it delicious!
While reading your blog post, this sort of reminds me of when I first tried mushroom on Pizza and I didn't even realize that it had any mushrooms because it honestly did not taste like anything at all!
I think to improve, you should just go through your blog post and proof read because you have some errors and mistakes in there but other than that, great job!
Awesome work!
Looking forward to your next posts,
Parwin
ok Parwin
ReplyDeleteHi Renae,
ReplyDeleteWhoop, whoop!! I'm so excited to see you have posted for the learning journey. I really liked your poster. I was surprised at some of the foods on it. Have you never tried cucumber or tomato before? I love both of those. In fact, most of the foods I find yum, except yams. I really don't like yams.
Thanks for sharing your post. I can't wait to read your next one.
:) Mrs Spragg
Hi there Renae, it's Jedi here ^_^ .
ReplyDeleteI think that you have done amazing job on your first S.L.J post, you have written a good description, told the reader why you are doing this and your post is super eye catching. I was as shocked as Mrs Spragg and Parwin, because of some things in your list. Have you had a burger🍔 before? If so, then surely you must have had onions🧅 and tomato🍅.
Anyways, to improve I think your should proof read and edit your introduction and description of your work. Because just as Parwin said, there are a few mistakes.
Keep up the great work Renae, remember if you plan to complete all the tasks you should get your second post up. It could be a simple one like the carrot eating challenge.
From my screen to yours
-Jedi⭐💙
Hey Renae.
ReplyDeleteThis is a great blog I love it.
I like how you have made this eye chatching.
I think you could inmprove on it a bit on making it more sence.
Anways great job I love it because it is a great and nice.
Keep it up.
MYKIALA YMS!!!!!!!