Hey Bloggers.
How are you?
I am going to be doing activity 2 now.
What we have to do is; Design your own meal, make it and eat it.
I named my meal:macaroni pile
It is mostly made out of: Macaroni and cheese
Would you eat my meal?
Challenge: Try It and make it. Share it to your family.
Here is the video.
are you going to try make it and eat it ,maybe your family will like it ( who Knows).
Did you like my post because I did?
Bye.
Bye.
Hi renae.
ReplyDeleteThis is great you know I have read and commented on your other post.
Next time you should watch your video because you said some words and then you paused it.
Great job anyway.
Mykiala.
Kia Ora Renae,
ReplyDeleteIts Grace .
I really liked your video that you make you explained really well in the steps how to do it.
I would like to try your meal that you made it looks good.
I can't do the meal or make the meal at the moment but I will try and make it one day.
To improve I would say try and explain on the blog about the spring learning journey maybe the points etc.
Plus maybe put it into a slide and make the front pretty so its more eye catching and people want to see it .
Apart from that its good,
Keep up the good work
-Grace
Hey Renae, it's me Parwin! I see you are also doing the Spring Learning Journey, the challenge is on!
ReplyDeleteI liked the fact that you made the steps clear and you had a loud clear voice in the video as well. I think that maybe some time in the future, I will try and make some 'macaroni pile' like you did!
This reminds me of when I made macaroni and pasta except it didn't have any cheese and it wasn't like the normal way that most people make it because I make my macaroni have more flavor and I add more things to it as well.
I think that maybe to improve, you could make it more eye catchy and also add some more information about maybe the way you felt while you were filming or maybe you could add some more info about the Spring Learning Journey or maybe even both!
Awesome work!
Looking forward to your next posts,
Parwin
Kia ora Renae,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed watching your video. You make a great cooking blogger! You could be like Rosanna Pansino and start your own cooking blog.
Thanks for sharing,
Mrs Spragg
Kia ora Renae, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School. (Like you know.)
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you put in a video of you making it and named it something.
This reminded me when I was making mince for my mum, she helped me a bit but I mostly did it myself.
To improve, you could always add more colour and a prettier font, also a shorter title would be better.
Who taught you to cook?
Bye Renae!
-Amelia 😉