Hey bloggers.
How are you?
Today I will be sharing with you the poem I wrote.
For the last two days we have been looking at two different peoples poems.
The two Poem people are: Valerie Bloom and Pie corbett.
My Poem was based on Pie Corbett's Poem: The Playground monster.
Here is the poem I wrote.
It turned around smiling with his horror jaws.
It walked up slowly to me.
His arms are hairy his paws have got sharp claws.
He grabbed me with his sharp and pointy paws.
Hes wanting to scratch me.
I started kicking him he got angry.
He squeezed me tighter.
I slid out of his paws.
I Ran off in fright.
I listen to him scratch on wall.
He heres my talking under my breath behind the bench.
It turned around smiling with his horror jaws.
It walked up slowly to me.
His arms are hairy his paws have got sharp claws.
He grabbed me with his sharp and pointy paws.
Hes wanting to scratch me.
I started kicking him he got angry.
He squeezed me tighter.
I slid out of his paws.
I Ran off in fright.
He went back into the attic to live a happy life.
I lived my life in fear tho.
My Poem is called:: The House Beast.
Should I write more poems.
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