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Wednesday, 27 May 2020

Not The Right Time [ writing]

Hi Bloggers hows your day?
Today I will be showing you a little story I wrote.
It is kinda creepy but not to creepy if you know what I mean.
This week we have been all doing narrative writing.
We have up to 25 different pieces of writing we could chose to write about on that day.
Today I chose to do this
It was fun to write about.
you are proably reading this to read my narrative.
 The tittle is the tittle of this blog. Not the right time.

Here is my story:




Did you read the last screenshot because that's when the rest of the story is coming.
Do you like my story so far?
See you next week.
BYE
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1 comment:

  1. Anonymous27 May 2020 at 14:18

    Hello Renae!
    It's me, Teegan!
    This is a great story that you have written!
    I like the fact that you added some description on the Second-hand store's appearance. However, I spotted a couple of the The(ir, re and 're) in the wrong place. But over all, Great Job!
    Kind Regards,

    - Teegan J. Ducharme

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