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43 Duck Pond Road,
Motukarara,
Christchurch 7672
15.10.18
Dear Motukarara Raceway
In the holidays I came to your racecourse, your racecourse is a wonderful place to be. I love how you congratulate the horse's owners by giving them a ribbon and some coasters. You guys make all the kids, adults, and parents super happy. The kid's area is amazing with the bounce house and farm animals. I enjoy you making the races awesome for the kids. I love coming to your place even though it takes a long time to get to Motukarara Raceway from Christchurch. The things I like the most about the racecourse is the music because it is extra calming. I like your idea of keeping dogs on leads around where the horses are.
The things I do not like about Motukararara Raceway is how it takes a long time for the next race to come on. I don’t like the bathrooms because sometimes they smell gross. Can you please change it? Can you get more kid stuff for the big kids so we will not get bored and can you please get some games there? LOVE YOUR RACECOURSE!!!
Love Renae Lloyd.
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